The Bacchanalia, The Butler and The Blindfold – FFF

woman in stockings corset and heels having a blindfold tied on her by a man with white gloves

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“I’m bored,” she’d said, “we never do anything different.”

Well, she wasn’t going to say that after tonight. It had taken him literally weeks to find the Bacchanalia Group, and get vetted and approved. But here they were, finally.

He had told her little, but the few parts she knew clearly excited her. Especially the cardinal rule that they both had to keep their blindfolds on the entire first night or they could never return.

She was dressed, or rather hardly dressed, exactly as instructed and now, with her coat removed and the silent Bacchanalia Butler tying the blindfold strap behind her head, her nostrils flared with every breath.

The faint sounds of people and pleasure greeted them as the Butler ushered the way down the long hall.


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Your challenge for today was to use the picture above, and to write a flash fiction piece of 129 words or less, excluding the title. Additionally, I challenged you to use your choice of a semordnilap, a reversible word that gives you one word spelled frontwards and a different word spelled backwards, example: star/rats, and to use both words in the story, and tell us which pairing you chose.

If you are playing along this week, please leave your link below using the widget you see. Your link will appear in the widget itself, not in the comments, so everyone that’s playing will be listed here below. Go check them out, and thanks to all who played along. Authors: remember that you may choose to put in a general link to your blog, or a specific link to your fiction post. I recommend a specific link so that readers passing through days, weeks or months from now will go straight to the story.

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6 thoughts on “The Bacchanalia, The Butler and The Blindfold – FFF

  1. Nice story, Ram!

  2. Very nicely done. I enjoyed this pic and prompt. 🙂

  3. Great story! Very exciting, and it definitely left us wanting more. Great semordnilap; as soon as we read “parts” we suspected that we’d find “strap” later in the story.